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Given: Feb 8, 2025 at 1:40pm
Length: 947 Characters |
846 w/o WritingML
Greetings, Sonali!
Well, we’re busy taking over I Write 2025 here I’m finally getting my steam rolling after floundering for the first seven days of February…
This is a super quick and simple read, showing us a young boy hesitant to try new foods and break his vegan diet as imposed by his mom. His willingness to accommodate his hostess is admirable. We see no underlying reasons why he should deny himself meat, such as a devotion to strict Hinduism. With that unaddressed, we can relax and cheer him on for being open minded.
When I write for the Writer’s Cramp, I like to include the prompt at the bottom for future reference. Also, a third genre would be good to help with Quill Nominations, such as Friendship. Other than that, this was a pleasant read.
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