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 | One For The Road  [E] This short is about a friendly night cap.  |
| (3.0)  Happy Writing.com Account Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Hi vondie Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.  Positives I liked the setup for the piece. It was quick and to the point, and easily established the potential for a much larger story. Suggestions Ultimately, the setup is the only thing presented in this piece, and I was hoping for a little more about what happens after the characters introduce themselves to one another. The story that comes from this setup hasn't been told yet, and I'd love to see where it goes. Overall Overall, I thought this was a good intro to a larger story. I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another Writing.com author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy"    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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