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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
More poems for Promptly Poetry, stuffed into this book because I have reached my limit.
by Ned Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Life Cycles" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned!

Well, I feel like I’m meeting you for the first time *Pthb* Why did I never think of looking at your portfolio and bio tab before? I’ve had you misgendered and stereotyped for months. I apologize *Blush*

This is a perfect example of “professional,” literary grade poetry. You paint word pictures carefully balanced on the page, with sensory details utilizing a well rounded vocabulary and crafting a sweeping yet loving and heartfelt overview of one’s life, from childhood to maturity. I deeply appreciate everything about it. Have you entered this into Shadows and Light yet? I’m sure it’s just what they’re looking for.

I always add a line count (and indeed a word count) at the bottom of the item just out of my own curiosity and in case I enter it into whatever. Say, upon closer examination (I’m looking for things to suggest so this review qualifies for the BEAR project) I see you didn’t actually use the word “daisies” as the prompt suggests. Is that a requirement? Perhaps dandelions will do.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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