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 A date with Loneliness  Open in new Window. [E]
It's cold tonight...
by Drake Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

This poem was short and simple, but packed a punch. I particularly liked the structure and the way you ended the last two stanzas with questions for the reader. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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