I really liked the surprise twist at the end of this story. It caught me off-guard and definitely kept me thinking about the story even after it was over.

I think a thorough proofread would help round out the piece a little, as there were several spelling/grammatical errors. I also think the ending would be just a little bit stronger if you ended on the "we don't have any male nurses on this floor" line as the very last line, rather then the penultimate line with an additional bit of dialogue after it.

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Nice job!