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 Review #4797530 |
 | Dear Me  [E] 2020 Entry  |
| (4.5)    HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"   My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE ESSAYThis is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's writing goals in 2020.  WHAT I LIKEDI loved the honest, introspective look by the author. Sometimes, it's hard to be honest with ourselves, especially if we've let ourselves done, but I like the hopeful tone set in the author's reflections.  POV NARRATION/TENSEThis is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. GOAL SETTING There's an assessment of 2019 writing goals and goals listed for the upcoming year. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I might suggest increasing the font so as to make it easier on the eyes here on WDC. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader using a conversational voice. While an older "Dear Me" essay it hits all the 'high' notes with a motivational tone of voice and realistic goals that could be applied even now. An Angel Army Review
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