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2020 Entry
by Nikola~Loves Her Gracie Girl! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE ESSAY

This is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's writing goals in 2020.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the honest, introspective look by the author. Sometimes, it's hard to be honest with ourselves, especially if we've let ourselves done, but I like the hopeful tone set in the author's reflections.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* GOAL SETTING

There's an assessment of 2019 writing goals and goals listed for the upcoming year.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I might suggest increasing the font so as to make it easier on the eyes here on WDC.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader using a conversational voice. While an older "Dear Me" essay it hits all the 'high' notes with a motivational tone of voice and realistic goals that could be applied even now.

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