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Prairie Waltz Open in new Window. [E]
Springtime ritual on the Oklahoma prairie.
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*Reading* THE POEM

The poem was about the circle of nature and natural life on the prairie.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poet used a good economy of words to paint vivid pictures of nature and it's cycle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. It has a nice cadence when read aloud.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to augment the presentation of the poem.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Black cloud, rotates overhead, rumbles and crackles,roars and swirls." I could easily picture this occurring in real time as I read. It put me in the moment as a reader.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a nicefit for the poem. Nice expression. Well done.

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