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Given: Jan 30, 2025 at 5:27pm
Length: 1,153 Characters |
1,021 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
The poem was about the circle of nature and natural life on the prairie.
WHAT I LIKED
The poet used a good economy of words to paint vivid pictures of nature and it's cycle.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. It has a nice cadence when read aloud.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to augment the presentation of the poem.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Black cloud, rotates overhead, rumbles and crackles,roars and swirls." I could easily picture this occurring in real time as I read. It put me in the moment as a reader.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a nicefit for the poem. Nice expression. Well done.
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