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 Dear Me Open in new Window. [E]
A letter to self for the year 2025.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE ESSAY

This is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's writing goals in 2025 as well as personal goals.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

The essay covers a lot of terroritory in a very concise manner. Very empowering goals.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* GOAL SETTING

There's an assessment of 2025 and personal goals listed for the upcoming year.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader using a conversational voice. I really enjoyed the personal goal setting. I think when we meet personal goals, it makes achieving writing goals easier. Good use of WDC ML and graphics in the presentation to keep the essay engaging. Good luck in the contest.

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