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Given: Jan 30, 2025 at 10:50am
Length: 753 Characters |
722 w/o WritingML
Trying to find courage during times of darkness is never easy. Sometimes one can see the sadness in others, yet be unable to do a thing to help, for one reason or another. All we can do is hope that they can find the strength within, so that they can come out of this personal darkness on their own. Only time can tell in such cases.
Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.
Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.
Suggestions
You might want to put some space between paragraphs for easier reading. Likewise, might want to bump this up to 13+ due to mild language.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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