Greetings My Fine Friend!

I can really see a very nice piece here! A tad of editing to free it a bit from unnecessary weight.



Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
I liked how the piece explores the duality and the plethora of experiences of life! I'm all ways a sucker for any thin existentialist!

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):
The rhythm and rhyme of each stanza really gives it a nice readability, plus an easy flow for the reader.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:

Your playful tone really pulls the reader in!

SKÖL!!

HRAFNAR

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .