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 Who am I? Open in new Window. [E]
Just some random poem
by Duke00 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I like the disjointed feeling of reading this poem; I think you did a great job using the structure to reflect the sentiment trying to be expressed.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. I always enjoy it when a poem's form also enhances its function, and you did that really well. Nice work!


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