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Positives
This was a short, entertaining piece. I thought you did a great job with the structure, and capturing the fun of visiting someone's port here on WdC.
Suggestions
Given the breadth of material people are writing about here on the site, I think you could easily expand the content of this piece and find rhymes for checking people's ports for stories, poems, etc.
Overall
Overall, this was a great piece. Nicely done!
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