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Review #4797139
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 Nosy Peek Open in new Window. [E]
A wee poem about checking out peoples portfolios
by Model citizen Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Model citizen

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Positives

This was a short, entertaining piece. I thought you did a great job with the structure, and capturing the fun of visiting someone's port here on WdC.


Suggestions

Given the breadth of material people are writing about here on the site, I think you could easily expand the content of this piece and find rhymes for checking people's ports for stories, poems, etc.


Overall

Overall, this was a great piece. Nicely done!


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