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 In Her Dreams Open in new Window. [E]
I couldn't let her go.
by ZombeeLuv Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really enjoyed the amount of story you were able to fit into a story of less than 500 words. Especially toward the end, you managed to tell a lot of narrative in a short span of time.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions.


Overall

Overall, I thought this was a good piece. Well done!


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