Ah, the old foot race. Trying to get from Point A to Point B, in the shortest time possible. Perhaps even get first place, and the coveted reward. Thus, one trains in order to win. However, no matter the training, no matter the rituals, no matter the lucky charms, something crazy tends to happen.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Unless this Foot Race includes Food - I see one misspelling in the last sentence.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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