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 Barren Open in new Window. [E]
deserts - both real and imagined
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really liked the structure of this piece. The rhyme scheme had an almost lyrical quality to it, and the pace of the read was quick and snappy. Nice work!


Suggestions

I don't have any specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a really good job with this piece. Well done!


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