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 The Eraser Open in new Window. [13+]
This is a poem I wrote about the fading memory of my mother who died when I was 13.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Positives

I liked the sentiment of this piece. I thought you did a great job capturing the feeling of loss and the determination to keep a loved one in your memory at the years march on. Nice work!


Suggestions

One typo I noticed: You're gone so it will one day win...


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read. Well done!


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