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 Love Me, Make Me Cry Open in new Window. [18+]
A sample from an idea that I have for a POSSIBLE story
by rhiannaseptember Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with the description and the detail in this story. It was really visceral and easy to imagine. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions that I could think of.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Good work!


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