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Scarlet Open in new Window. [13+]
In the subdued darkness, she is the stronger one.
by iKïyå§ama Author Icon
Review of Scarlet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I'll be honest - had to reread a few sections once or twice to understand what was going on. A young woman lives with an older woman, taking care of the place. However, it seems that the older one is abusive, and has even brought home boyfriends that do terrible things to the younger one. As a result, the young woman has developed a split personality, who is willing to do certain things to deal with the problems. A rather dark tale.

Characters
The characters are rather interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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