I really like the premise of this horror interactive. It's a tried and true concept with lots of options to expand from the initial set of options in different and entertaining ways.

I would recommend providing a little more detail about the kind of story you're looking to tell in the introduction. The info about this being your first crack at Writing.com and your intention with the piece (which is all great), but having a bit more story/exposition early on might help garner more interest in this piece through specificity.

Overall, I think your interactive is off to a good start. Nice work!