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 Big Open in new Window. [E]
A silly poem I wrote long ago for a poetry class about a phenomenon I really experienced.
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Review of Big  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am dropping by to give you a review of what I understand your poetry to mean. I chose this poem for the Title and Description.
This is my opinion of your poem and if you find it helpful I have accomplished a goal. Remember this is your write and I am only giving you my opinion

Rhythm: Yes I found rhythm in this short poem of the way things are. Even later in life, experience the same when I went in the army. I returned 7 years later and all was smaller than I remembered.

Rhyme: The rhyme is fine in the ABCB scheme you chose.

Imagery: Imagery is what set me thinking of how I remembered things

Impact: The impact is there in the title BIG.

Overall opinion:I enjoyed the poem.
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