A story about why you should never judge a book by its cover. A young woman, who wants to find buried treasure, wakes up to discover that a UFO has crash-landed by her home. While exploring it, she gets knocked out. Coming to, she encounters aliens that seem nice, but have evil intentions. Thankfully, she gets rescued by another group that seems rude, but otherwise means well. Makes one think. I wonder if another will come.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You got a few sections that need correct punctuation, and in the first paragraph, the one sentence needs finished.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!


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