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 The More Love You Get Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about life for the innocent as they grow older.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Tim Chiu

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really liked the message of this piece, and the way is was presented. There was an eloquence to the piece that I appreciated.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement that I could find.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Nice work!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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