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 Flaws Open in new Window. [13+]
My view of myself
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hi Jade stone

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a great job getting the point across in this poem. It was well structured, visual, and interesting.


Suggestions

Some of the line breaks (particularly the ones where a single sentiment or phase was split across multiple lines) made the readability of those sections a little rough.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a solid job with this item. Well done!


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