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 Breaking the Ice Open in new Window. [E]
A plumbing emergency leads to an unexpected connection between two strangers.
by Sam J Walker Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A woman arrives home, planning to get ready for her date, only to notice that her neighbor has some sort of leak going on. Entering the unit to try to help said neighbor, she ends up seeing an unknown man doing their best to try to help the owner of the unit out. After dealing with the craziness that was happening - including saving some pet fish, the woman finds a rather pleasant surprise - the identity of her date.

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Characters seem interesting.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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