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Positives
It's always a pleasure to have the opportunity to review one of your poems, and this piece is certainly no exception. I really like the way you structured this piece and the homage to "The Birds." Well done!
Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
As always, your poetry is top notch. Keep up the good work!
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