Hi Raja,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Emily and Alex will become a couple. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man and woman who are brought together by what they consider their flaws. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)As they got to know each other better, she learned that the man, named Alex, had been going through a tough time and was feeling lonely and disconnected before they met. He had given up on the idea of ever finding love and was just going through the motions of his day. But their chance meeting had brought new meaning and purpose to his life.-This paragraph appears earlier in the story.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.