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 Tyler Open in new Window. [13+]
Two friends find themselves amidst a mass shooting at the railway station in Chicago.
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Review of Tyler  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Two young men go to a train station, and find themselves early for their ride. As a result, they now must wait. However, this is one time that they will wish that they were late. A gunman shows up, and it seems he wants to make a name for himself, and rack up the body-count. Will the two friends make it through this horror, or will they be among the fallen?

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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