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 Why Open in new Window. [E]
a poem about why there had to be a choice
by Ginger44 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am dropping by to give you a review of what I understand your poetry to mean. I chose this poem for the Title and Description.
This is my opinion of your poem and if you find it helpful I have accomplished a goal. Remember this is your write and I am only giving you my opinion

Rhythm: The rhythm in this poem changes some as you change the rhyme scheme but some rhythm is found.

Rhyme: The rhymeing words are found in different place in your couplets which as I have noted throws the rhythm off a bit.

Imagery: The imagery is good in the write and paints a picture.

Impact: Message of loss is the impact given the reader and is very strong.

Overall opinion: I enjoyed the read and can see how by changeing a few words you could make an improvement.
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