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 To the one I love Open in new Window. [E]
a poem pleading for mercy
by Ginger44 Author Icon
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Review by Hrafnar Árgeir Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (2.5)
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Greetings Sir!

I enjoyed the poem very much. I am talking about the piece I feel under is stiff structure and either unnecessary word repetition or an interesting tool to use.

"We need to cut some fat!" do this and what the piece bloom!

Keep going!!! Nothing constructive for now, I bid you Adieu!




SKÖL!!
Hrafnar Árgeir


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