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 To the one I love Open in new Window. [E]
a poem pleading for mercy
by Ginger44 Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Ginger44

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

The execution of this poem was great. I really liked the underlying sentiment, and the short, efficient structure really helped to drive things home in an impactful way.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this poem. Well done!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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