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 Sails of the awakened Open in new Window. [E]
from calm to rough to calm oceans and seas
by WindSpirit3 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Ah, the ocean. There is nothing quite like being on it. All that water around you, as your boat bobs up and down. Depending upon the weather, more could be happening, or not much at all. Sometimes you see amazing animals, and sometimes you merely see the weather. There is nothing like it.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, although I am puzzled about the use of the word buffalo.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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