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Review #4792544
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 Sky on fire Open in new Window. [E]
Inspiration for this was a sunset and the song "everything we forget" by have a nice life
by Moonstruck Sophie Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Moonstruck Sophie

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Positives

The structure of this poem was great, and I really liked the sentiment that you conveyed in such a concise way. Nice job!


Suggestions

I don't have any specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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