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 singing Open in new Window. [E]
bird in a cage, resentment, and being ignored in age
by snaiilpebbles Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Singing, school activities, and the desire for our parents to come and see us perform. Never got into singing myself, but there was a time that I got into wrestling and soccer for a brief while, and my little brother just loved football and many other sports. Winning or losing didn't matter as much as seeing our folks watching and cheering us on. That was what we wanted.

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Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Have some space between paragraphs - makes reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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