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Given: Dec 29, 2024 at 1:35pm
Length: 701 Characters |
670 w/o WritingML
Singing, school activities, and the desire for our parents to come and see us perform. Never got into singing myself, but there was a time that I got into wrestling and soccer for a brief while, and my little brother just loved football and many other sports. Winning or losing didn't matter as much as seeing our folks watching and cheering us on. That was what we wanted.
Thoughts
Makes one think.
Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.
Suggestions
Have some space between paragraphs - makes reading easier.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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