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 Rhythm Of The Soul Open in new Window. [E]
The art of rhythm and rhymes, a passion that flows so deep
by AnnaRosa Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I'm so glad to meet you. WdC is a wonderful place, and I can see you've already had a warm welcome from other reviewers around here. I love finding people who write poetry with charm and grace, and you seem to be just my type.

This is a lovely poem, with a strong rhythm which carries us through with the feeling of a song. You describe the thrill of putting pen to paper and crafting beautiful works of word art for others to share and enjoy. The words are simple yet profound, and we feel your newfound delight in what you do.

I have nothing to suggest for improvement on what you've written here. It's a sentiment I agree with wholeheartedly, and I think it would look lovely written out in fancy script, printed and framed.

I always recommend learning how to use the row of text modification tiles above the entry box, as a larger font size and style helps make your item stand out, especially on desktop. Size 4 Verdana is my standard.

Poetry is one of my special hobbies here, and if you're interested I have a couple of book items stuffed with poems: "Promptly Poetry" Open in new Window. and "Magic Eight" Open in new Window.

Which brings me to an important point. As a newbie with a free account, you will soon run out of portfolio space (ten items.) If you make yourself known in the community, I'm sure someone will give you an upgraded membership if you need the help. Otherwise, you can gather multiple poems into a single item. There are some tricks to help organize large items into something similar to chapters and indexing here "Writing.Com 101" Open in new Window. I'm not too familiar, never having used them.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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