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 Thank you. Open in new Window. [13+]
Acrostic poem
by Mary Ann MCPhedran Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Mary Ann!

I found this using the Random Read and Review Button.

A beautiful, simple and heartfelt prayer built on an acrostic. I deeply appreciate your sentiment.

I have a few typos to suggest you fix...
1. The tagged item is invalid; you may want to remove it or add a few words explaining what type of writing project it was.
2. The word "you" is duplicated in the first line.
3. The third line seems like it should read "serve You in the decisions..." rather than "and the decisions"
4. In the fourth line "when you're by my side" the word "you're" is misspelled.

Aside from these little things, I really enjoyed this and found it moving. I pray you have many blessings in the year ahead.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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