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 Bright Yellow Ribbon  Open in new Window. [E]
Eight line poem
by Sumojo Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Sumojo

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*Train* Positives

I particularly enjoyed the pace and the structure of this poem. I thought you did a great job with the prompt, and utilized it to create a fun piece with vivid imagery and a story to tell. Nice work!


*Train* Suggestions

I don't have any particular suggestions for improvement.


*Train* Overall

Overall, I thought this poem was a great take on the prompt and very well done. Nice work!


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