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 Dear Jesus Open in new Window. [E]
Letter to Jesus
by smbriere Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really identified with the emotions and the struggle in this poem. Faith is a tricky thing, and I thought you did a great job capturing what it's like to wrestle with it in the tough times.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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