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The Fool Open in new Window. [E]
This is a poem about a wise fool. (I know. I know) (Oxymoron right?)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Chris!

Not sure how this showed up on Random Read and Review, but here I am.

A quick and amusing rhyming story about a king's jester who strikes it big when he helps his master solve the riddle. We see him rise in power, yet still retain his personality as a fool who keeps everyone laughing. It reminds me of the Jester in Ivanhoe.

A couple of tiny typos... One is in the fourth line where you mixed up "too" and "to." Then the word "breeches..." If you're using the vernacular, you can spell it "britches" and it would suit the rhyme more visually than otherwise. I think either spelling is accurate, though I'd have to do some research on that one...

Wishing you happy holidays and a lovely new year *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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