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 ABC Lesson Open in new Window. [E]
For each distinct letter, I choose a word relevant to our life.
by Kermit Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com, Kermit!

What a coincidence: I received your review letting me know you'll be posting this, and I hit the Random Read and Review button, and here it is!

I love how philosophical it is, teaching us things about life by guiding us through the alphabet. It would make a nice thing to share with children, especially these days when they're exposed to serious issues at tender ages.

On mobile, I can't give advice about line lengths or anything, but I'm sure it all balances out well if it were on a normal screen size. You appear to have used a good font size and style. Perhaps adding a space where there's an extra line of poetry going deeper into a single letter, before moving to the next letter, would be helpful to sort through it visually. You could also separate each letter in bold if you think that would help.

Your thoughts about the words are balanced and wise, allowing us all to appreciate the advice even if we have different worldviews. On this site we have people from all walks of life and around the world, and the diversity is amazingly peaceful and welcoming.

I would highly recommend you add genres to the item; it's one of the essential elements of getting your work noticed, as people often like to sort through items by genre. Another important thing is the yearly Quill Awards, which are nominated partly by genres. I would suggest Philosophy, Children's, and Experience, but there are so many more possibilities. Relationship, Friendship , Inspirational, Family, Writing... even How-to/Advice.

I also like to always add a line count and word count at the bottom of my items, as it's a required habit to form for submission to contests. I'm pretty sure, in fact, that this would qualify for entry to "The Long Poetry Contest" Open in new Window.... Stop by and see!

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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