Hello Purple OnePride ,

I am here with a review for your holiday themed poem because I am taking part in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024" .

Aw. This is so sweet. Looking forward not to presents, but to the delight of a child who will open up presents is truly what this whole thing is about. It's fun to see children enjoy their new toys, clothes, gimmicks, and the festive foods of the season.

Starting out with "I" made you able to have a perfect pine tree shape with a sharp tip. Considering that a Christmas tree can have a star at the top, a three letter word could have also worked. Although I can't think of a good one.

This poem made me laugh a little when it said to sleep and to snore and smile when it said her smiles of wonder.

Well written.

Annette