Hello dragonwoman ,

I am here with a review for your holiday themed story because I am taking part in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024" .

The suspense! What in the world is Kat's present? Is the thumbnail of a horse and the general descriptions of a barn and living on a farm a hint at a horse or a pony? Or is it something else? Argh! I caint stand the suspense! To say it with Kat. That was some really good accent writing by the way. Usually, it's hard to incorporate regional ways of talking without making the accent too thick or watering it down, but yours here was on point.

The story was very visual. I was right there with the protagonists.

Very good writing that roped me in and leaves me wondering. If this were a book, I would turn the pages until I found out what the present was.

Keep writing.

Annette