Hello Jacky ,

I am here with a review for your holiday themed story because I am taking part in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024" .

This was a fun read. I started guessing that Alex and Randy weren't kids or people when the window well was mentioned the first time. I like that you only gave away what they really are at the very end. Even if it was somewhat expected.

Three pounds! That's a lot. Of course, it works for this kind of over the top story. It would be unusual for the likes of Alex and Randy to come up with a whole operation in which they empty out a kitchen worth of cookie racks.

There was one ending quotation mark missing:

“I think it’s amazing! Let’s get some before they come home!" They gathered and ran in and out several times.

Keep writing.

Annette