Hello, "Ugly Christmas Sox", aka rinsoxy!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Just Dance" poem every time I read it, including today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Just Dance" poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "December" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this "Just Dance" poem of yours. There's a dance for every move and every body that can move.

You did a great job of conveying many movements with a minimum of words in your "Just Dance" poem.

My favorite line was: "just dance," which was also the title and a refrain. I wondered if you sent this in to "So You Think You Can Dance," if they'd read it on the air? Maybe during national or worldwide dance day, even. That would be so cool.

I thought the free verse style was perfect for this "Just Dance" poem of yours.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Just Dance" poem.

I thought the biographical, and activity genres you selected were appropriate for this poem (and overall folder) of yours.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Just Dance" poem, and related to your sentiments that you expressed in it.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart for dance, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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