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Review #4790978
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 Madness Open in new Window. [13+]
A novel excerpt, a poem
by JJ Robinson II Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Positives

Really nice job on this poem! In very few words and stanzas, you've maged to create a really evocative, vivid piece with great structure and a compelling message. Excellent work!


Suggestions

No suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece.


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