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Will He Or Won't He? Open in new Window. [18+]
Is Santa going to retire? 300 words
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy holidays!

I'm on the hunt for holiday items to participate in "12 Days Of Christmas 2024" Open in new Window., and this looked like a lovely quick read.

Flash fiction is always so much fun, kind of like fast food (I can't remember what I used to say in my ff reviews... *Pthb*) A little shot of the imagination in an otherwise dull and boring day *Smile*

This was creative and enjoyable, from the names Candy and Cane to the intriguing premise, which ends happily and predictably yet with room for sequels. What if something serious happened and Santa couldn't do anything else but retire? Hey, what if he has a twin? Ooh, what if it's an evil twin? Sometimes the best part of a story is wondering what might happen after it's over.

No suggestions for improvement here; as a quick Writer's Cramp entry, this was a nice piece.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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