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Given: Dec 18, 2024 at 8:43pm
Length: 726 Characters |
695 w/o WritingML
A man is waiting at a bar. It seems that he was recently released from prison, where he'd spent time for a crime of some sort. A friend of his soon arrives, and they begin to talk. As it turns out, someone had once been doing bad things to the friend, and the man had put a stop to it, the extra hard way. However, there might be more issues going on.
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Due to language, and subject matter, might want to bump this item's rating to at least 18+.
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