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The Darkness Open in new Window. [18+]
A hero or a villain? It's a fine line to walk.
by Gerritdunn Author Icon
Review of The Darkness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A man is waiting at a bar. It seems that he was recently released from prison, where he'd spent time for a crime of some sort. A friend of his soon arrives, and they begin to talk. As it turns out, someone had once been doing bad things to the friend, and the man had put a stop to it, the extra hard way. However, there might be more issues going on.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Due to language, and subject matter, might want to bump this item's rating to at least 18+.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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