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 Fire and Stardust Open in new Window. [13+]
Dragons War Love? So much to deal with. Can she do it? Follow Astraea in her adventure!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting story. There's a war where dragons are trying to protect their homes from a group of invaders. It also looks like the war isn't going too well. One dragon, normally charged with looking after the young, is called to take part un the battle, despite their own issues. Can they make a difference in the fight?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There is a "tho" that should be "though", in the section where the commander's uniform is being described.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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