Ah, the start of an interesting story. You have a man driving a delivery van up to a house. However, it turns out that this driver delivers only one kind of package option - death, for it seems that he is a murderer for hire. Soon enough, his victims are at his mercy. What will happen next? Read more to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might be a good idea to have some space between paragraphs for easier reading.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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