Hi Acedia,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of peace and serenity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, you are doing one of your favorite things; taking a relaxing walk. I don't do a lot of it in the Winter, but I love to walk in the Summer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.