Hi Jake,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a man who meets and the love of his life and they spend wonderful times enjoying their life together. I am hoping that this couple will continue to remain happy together. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.